2 | Pontes
March 30, 2009 at 8:42 am

My Paragraph about “To be a teenager”.

To be a teenager is hard, because we are always thinking about the present, we don´t think about the future, which is very bad. We have to make an effort now at school, because if we don´t do it now, we will not be anything in the future. But teenagers are always worried about the future. Some teenagers don´t understand that the future is in our hands. But to be a teenager is fun, because we don´t have to worry about bills at the end of the mon(u)th. It is cool (ti)to be a teenager but one day we will grow(n) up and will be adults. Because of that, I have to take the opportunity and live the life as a teenager.

etelvira
April 19, 2009 at 5:12 pm

Pontes,

You’ve got a wonderful paragraph, but you should write it in the appropriate post, which is “To be a teenager”.
Bye
Your teacher

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